On the Run – Part 5

To read the previous parts of the story, follow the links: Part One, Part Two, Part Three, Part Four


On the other side of the gatehouse the world fell into darkness once more, a darkness that grew deeper the further away we moved from the bonfires by the fence.  Still the two men upfront ignored me.  We drove on.  I don’t know for how long.  I dozed off and on – there was nothing else to do – until something caught my attention.

Out of the darkness appeared a multitude of lights, illuminating the strangest building I had ever seen.  In the city, buildings, no matter what they were, be they houses or factories, were all concrete and glass and metal.  Most people described them as being cheap and functional unless you were an architect, who preferred the words “fresh” and “clean”.  The building in front of us was different.  It was made out of brick, a material I had only read about in old books, and it looked really old.  At each end of the long rectangular structure, that was perhaps five or six floors high, was a tower that rose up into the sky, dwarfing the central part of the building.  To say that it looked imposing would have been an understatement.

The car pulled up at the front of the house, where the lights were brightest.  The glare from them hurt my eyes.  Then the door was opened.

“You’re to come with us, sir.”  Two men were waiting by the side of the vehicle.

I got out and stretched my legs, which were stiff after hours of sitting still.  “Where are we?” I asked, wondering if this time someone might give me answer, but my question went unnoticed.

“This way,” one of the men said, before turning and moving towards the building.  The other one waited for me to start walking and brought up the rear.  I felt suspiciously like I was under guard.

On entering the building, people stopped whatever they were doing and openly stared at me, making me nervous.  What made me feel worse was that in our wake, I could distinctly hear my name being said in amongst the excited whispering.  How did they know who I was and why did it warrant this kind of reaction?

Up stairs and along corridors we went.  I tried to remember the route taken, but it was impossible.  Doors that I assumed would lead to rooms instead led to other corridors full of more doors.  I very quickly became disoriented.  Finally we stopped outside one room.  The man leading pushed open the door and indicated for me to enter, which I did.  I had assumed that there was someone in there waiting for me, hopefully with some explanation as to what was going on.  However, as soon as the door closed behind me, I heard the sound of a key turning in the lock and I realised my mistake.

I was trapped.


This was written in response to Emily’s Sunday Scrawl #5 photo prompt, over at A Writer’s Beginning.  Thanks for the inspiration, Emily 🙂

 

On the Run – Part 4

To read the previous parts of the story, follow the links: Part One, Part Two, Part Three


I walked through the snow in silence, my worries about the night drawing in only marginally lessened by the finding of the concealed path.  I tried to whistle a tune but I couldn’t think of any.

I hadn’t gone far when the stillness shattered.  A loud bang, somewhere in the distance, caused me to start violently.  Recollections of dawn raids in the city came back to me in an instant, along with the fear and the panic that always accompanied them.  I could not pinpoint the source of the sound, nor the direction it came from.

It took me a good few minutes to calm down. Only after I had reasoned with myself that I was no longer in the city, and that I was safer here than I had been in months, did I do the one thing I could do: keep walking.

A little while after that it was fully dark, and some time after that – I had no way to tell how long – I caught the gentle purr of an engine.  And it was getting louder.  There was nowhere for me to hide.  I was cold and tired.  So I just stood there and waited.

Lights appeared ahead of me.  I raised my arms to shield my eyes from the blinding brightness.  A car stopped a few metres away.

“Are you Luke Ridgeway?” a voice called out the window.

“Yes…but how do you know that?”  My question was ignored.

“You’re to come with us, sir.  We would’ve met you at the gate but the snow slowed us down and then we blew a tire.”

“Come with you where?”

“We are not at liberty to disclose that information, sir.  Please get in.  Or stay out here and perish.  Your choice.”

It wasn’t really much of a choice, so I discarded the dead branch and climbed in.

There were two men sitting in the front of the car; a driver and a passenger.  From the moment I got in, they talked quietly amongst themselves, and ignored me.  I fell asleep.

I was jolted awake, as the car bumped along an uneven surface.  I looked out of the windscreen and saw what looked to be bonfires stretched along the outside of a huge fence that loomed before us.

The vehicle paused at a gatehouse, where armed guards were stationed.  One of the more senior personnel approached the car and the driver handed him a piece of paper which he proceeded to read.  On looking up he stared at me intently, but directed his question to the driver.

“Are you sure?”  There was a trace of both excitement and disbelief in his voice.

“That’s what I was told.  I know nothing else.”

The man nodded, stepped back and waved us through the gate.  It clanged closed behind us with an ominous sound that sent chills right through me.

Something didn’t feel right here.  What had I gotten myself into?


This was written in response to Emily’s Sunday Scrawl #4 photo prompt, over at A Writer’s Beginning.  Thanks for the inspiration, Emily 🙂

On the Run – Part 3

To read the previous parts of the story, follow the links: Part One, Part Two


Although I understood perfectly the danger of my situation, and that, in all likelihood, it would never come to an end, I had hoped that on reaching this place that I might be granted a period of respite.  My hope was in vain.

When I stepped through the gate, the white, snow-covered vista continued on and on, undisturbed for as far as I could see.  There was nothing else here.  No building to shelter in.  No-one to meet me.  Nothing.  And there was no indication of what I was to do next.

It was true.  This place was an unforgiving wasteland.

I tried to think.  I tried not to panic.  I failed on both counts.  It would be dark soon, and the temperature was rapidly dropping.  I had made it out of the city only to find myself stuck in a barren, foreign landscape, all alone, where I knew I wouldn’t last the night.

I fell to my knees, as I realised that I would soon be dead and there was nothing I could do about it.  I had no provisions, nothing to keep the freezing cold at bay.  I wasn’t scared of death; it came to us all, but I was terrified of feeling helpless.

And so, to prevent me dwelling on what was to come, I knew I had to keep moving; keep my mind and body occupied.  As I made to push myself up, my hand went right through the snow and found itself resting on something cold and hard.  Stone.  For some reason, the snow in front of the gate didn’t appear to be as thick as everywhere else.  I don’t know what drove me to do it, but I scooped the snow away and uncovered a large, flat paving stone, then another and another.

Hidden beneath the snow was a footpath.  If I had to guess, the snow had been cleared either yesterday or first thing this morning, but a more recent dusting had covered it back up.  The path had to lead somewhere if someone had made the effort to uncover it.

I ran back to the hedge and pried a dead branch from beneath its evergreen limbs.  Then instead of using my hands to reveal each stepping stone (for they were now freezing, and the process too time-consuming), I pushed the branch through the snow every few steps, ensuring it struck stone each time and guided me true.

Now all I had to do was find out where the pathway went.  I hoped it was somewhere warm and dry, and not too far away.


This was written in response to Emily’s Sunday Scrawl #3 photo prompt, over at A Writer’s Beginning.  Thanks for the inspiration, Emily 🙂

On the Run (part 2)

To read the previous instalment of this flash fiction serial, click here: Part One


I made the train.  I still don’t know how.  One minute I was running, sure I was going to miss it, the next, the locomotive slowed down to go through the tunnel.  I caught up with the last carriage, grabbed a handle and pulled myself up.  Opening the door was trickier, thanks to the cold, but I did it.

The rear carriage was empty, so I had no fear of being found.  I took a seat next to the window and tried to calm down.  I never imagined making it this far.

The train wouldn’t stop again for twelve hours, so I dozed for a while.  When I woke it was to find that the forest had gone and in its place a snow-white expanse stretched for miles and miles, until it merged imperceptibly with the snow-filled sky.  We had reached the Wastelands.

No one got off in the Wastelands.  Ever.  There are no stations, no homes, no people.  Nothing.  Only ghosts from the war.  But that was my destination. Oh, and if you were found there, you would be executed.

After five hours or so, I started to look outside for the sign that meant my train journey was at an end: a tree standing alone with a large strip of red fabric tied to it.  Then I jumped off, a dense blanket of snow cushioning my landing.

My directions, all committed to memory, were to climb the hill before me.  It was hard-going through the snow and by the time I reached the top I was freezing.  But what I saw on the other side was more than enough to make me forget the cold and even the danger I was in. Out of the snow protruded a huge iron gate, held up by massive stone pillars, which were flanked on either side by a short section of dense hedges.

What was this place?  It looked like a ruin, a relic of the time before war tore our country apart.

I walked down the slope, my curiosity growing.  My anxiety too.  I had no idea what or who I would find here.  When I reached the gate, I looked through the bars, but all I could see was more snow.  Tentatively, I lifted the latch, pushed open the gate and walked through.


This was written in response to Emily’s Sunday Scrawl #2 photo prompt, over at A Writer’s Beginning.  Thanks for the inspiration, Emily 🙂

A quick update…

Just a quick update…

I have posted Chapter 2 of one of my on-going writing projects, which I am posting a chapter at a time on Wattpad.

The story, Ada’s Jack: A Tale of Love and The Great War, can be found here.

The description:

Ada’s Jack tells the story of a young woman in love at the start of The Great War. The young man she loves is eighteen year old Jack Baker, who also happens to be her brother’s best friend. Like millions of people across the world, their plans for a happy future are put on hold as young men are called up or volunteer for war service. But what will become of them?

I would love to hear what you think of the story so far.

Breaking Out of One’s Comfort Zone

Ada's JackI have been away for a few days, for a lovely break in Shropshire.  I love Shrewsbury; it’s such a beautiful town and I always feel inspired after visiting.  Whilst away this time, I decided to challenge myself to write something completely out of my comfort zone…a love story set during The Great War, AND…post it as I write it on Wattpad, a chapter at a time.

I don’t usually like to share what I have written until I have it perfect, at least to my eyes 🙂  I also have never shared something that wasn’t finished first, so I really feel like I am pushing myself with this challenge.  And yes, it is making me terribly nervous…

I’m not sure that I am completely happy with the title of the story or the front cover at present, but that is something that I can work on at a later date.

Here is the description of the story:

Ada’s Jack: A Tale of Love and The Great War

Ada’s Jack tells the story of a young woman in love at the start of The Great War. The young man she loves is eighteen year old Jack Baker, who also happens to be her brother’s best friend. Like millions of people across the world, their plans for a happy future are put on hold as young men are called up or volunteer for war service. But what will become of them?

Please check out the first chapter AND let me know what you think by following this link:

Ada’s Jack Chapter One